This is the fourth part of the story inspired by SweetAndyLatex artwork "Come in Young Man":
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For the first part see http://amandablogtest.blogspot.co.uk/2016/10/come-in-young-man-part-1.html
Part 4 - Sunday (2)
http://smoothslicknshiny.blogspot.co.uk/2016/10/new-art-come-in-young-man.html
For the first part see http://amandablogtest.blogspot.co.uk/2016/10/come-in-young-man-part-1.html
Part 4 - Sunday (2)
Jane did not
bother helping Andy into the Merc. Andy
opened the passenger door and slid into the leather seat. The leather was cool against his bottom; it
matched the atmosphere within the car, which was distinctly frosty. Jane started the engine, checked her mirrors
and pulled away. It was twenty past
ten. They should reach her house by the
coast shortly after mid-day. That’s if
she didn’t just go direct to Andy’s parents’ house and drop her passenger off
as he was. He could come round and
pick-up his jeans later, if he dared she thought. Neither spoke.
As they’d
walked away from Rebecca’s apartment, Andy had fallen in behind Jane. Approaching the lift, Jane felt Andy’s hand
touch hers and try to take hold of her palm.
She’d pushed it away. She didn’t
look at him in the lift and just stared at the buttons.
It was
Sunday morning in the City and traffic was very light. Jane made good progress, deciding to avoid
the M25 and head due south across the river.
All the time she drove in silence.
She picked up the M23 and put the throttle down. She wanted to get the journey over with.
Eventually Andy spoke although it was more of a nervous mumble. “Please Aunt Jane, I need the toilet. Can we stop, please?”
“Yes, if we
must,” Jane replied grudgingly. Then she
added, “I could do with a cup of coffee myself.”
“Thank you,
Aunt Jane.”
“Oh, it’s
Jane is it? Not Jan, or Janey.“
“Please,
Aunt Jane,” Andy pleaded.
“Or maybe
Jex?” Andy did not respond.
Just before
the motorway merged into the A-road, Jane pulled off for the Services. Although
it was a small service area and quite busy, there were still a few spaces and
she could park quite near the entrance. As
she came to halt she said, “Off you go then.
I’ll see you in the Café.”
Andy didn’t
move. At last he spoke, “Could I borrow
the trench-coat, please Aunt Jane.”
“What do you
need that for? You seem quite
adequately dressed. ‘Beccs’ seemed
very happy with what you were wearing,” she said sneeringly. “Don’t you feel comfortable in her clothes?”
“Please,
Aunt Jane?” Andy implored. Jane was still holding the handbrake
lever. She felt a soft little hand rest
on top of hers. It was trembling. She wanted to push it away but instead turned
towards Andy. It was the first time
she’d looked him properly in the face since leaving Rebecca’s apartment. The front neckline of his shirt had darkened:
it was damp with tears that were streaming from Andy’s eyes. Andy’s mascara and eyeliner had made dirty
streaks across his face and down his chin and neck. He’d clearly been sobbing silently throughout
the journey.
Jane still
wanted to be annoyed with him but she was finding it difficult. Her boy was in tears and crying his heart
out. Her heart began to thaw. She said,
“Yes, you can borrow my coat. It
sort of suits you.” Jane freed her hand, got out of the car and
retrieved the coat from the back seat.
She went round and opened the passenger door shielding him from other
people on the car park. She held out
the coat while Andy, emerging from his seat, tucked his arms into the sleeves. She wrapped the coat around him and knotted
the belt. Although Andy didn’t raise
his head or his eyes, he looked like a bedraggled young waif. She placed her hands on his upper arms and
held him a few inches from her. She
couldn’t bear seeing Andy looking so sad and sorry. She composed herself and said, “You know I
love you.”
“Yes,
Auntie. Yes, Aunt Jane, I do.”
Jane let go
of Andy and reached into the glove box of the car to retrieve her handbag. “Now
let’s get you to the loo and tidied up.”
She locked the car and walked hand-in-hand with Andy across the entrance
to the Services. Andy still had his head
down, not wanting anyone to look at him.
As she pointed him in the direction of the Ladies, Jane opened her
handbag and took out her make-up case. “You’ll
find some wet wipes and what you need, she said passing him the case that he
took tentatively. “Come on honey, we
need to get you presentable.” With a
firm on his bottom, Jane pushed him towards the loo. “I’ll be over in Costa’s. Do you want anything?”
“A skinny
latte, please,” he said and went into the Ladies while Jane joined the queue to
place her order.
“A double
espresso, a regular skinny latte, and two glasses of water, please.” Jane wondered whether Andy would want anything
to eat and then thought about the hot breakfast he may have already had. “And a pain au chocolat, please.” Jane paid and after a short wait was given
a tray with the drinks and food. There
wasn’t much seating space and she took the only available little table near the
window. She sipped the espresso then
drank some water.
The coffee helped her
clear her head. She knew she’d been
unreasonable. After all she’d allowed
Andy to get into this predicament. It
didn’t help that she was furious with Rebecca.
She’d worked hard on the Verity proposal and to find that Rebecca had
somehow already secured the deal was simply unacceptable. She knew she was directing some of her fury
with Rebecca at Andy. It was only
natural that Rebecca would find Andy attractive: Jane would have been
disappointed if she hadn’t. It was what
had happened between her boss and Andy that concerned Jane. That wasn’t just fury. It was jealousy, possessiveness and even a
sense of violation. Rebecca had kissed
her boy.
Parts 5 to 15 to follow.
Interesting little addition. I find myself needing to go back and reread earlier chapters to refresh my memory. Very well done. Looking forward to dipping my toes in future chapters.
ReplyDeleteWhy thank you, Lee. Yes, it is a long story but I hope you'll enjoy the other parts.
DeleteHope you may also like "In My Younegr and More Vulnerable Days" at http://inmyyounger.blogspot.com
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and a return Thank you, Ms. Stallion
DeletePlease do not have us wait so long between installments.
I find IMYaMVD interesting, but this story line is more fleshed out to me. I enjoy the art more and it just hits home.
and a return Thank you, Ms. Stallion
DeletePlease do not have us wait so long between installments.
I find IMYaMVD interesting, but this story line is more fleshed out to me. I enjoy the art more and it just hits home.